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	<title>Freelance Copywriter &#124; Web / SEO Copywriter &#124; Brighton/London &#187; active voice</title>
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		<title>Use the active voice &#8211; Copywriting tip #2</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Aug 2008 05:04:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Leif Kendall</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<div class="addthis_toolbox addthis_default_style addthis_32x32_style" addthis:url='http://www.kendallcopywriting.co.uk/use-the-active-voice-copywriting-tip-2/' addthis:title='Use the active voice &#8211; Copywriting tip #2 ' ><a class="addthis_button_preferred_1"></a><a class="addthis_button_preferred_2"></a><a class="addthis_button_preferred_3"></a><a class="addthis_button_preferred_4"></a><a class="addthis_button_compact"></a></div>Here’s what I mean. Below are two pieces of copy for a hammer: Passive This powerful hammer can strike nails into the toughest timber. Active This powerful hammer strikes nails into the toughest timber. Pull back the smothering blanket Using the active voice often shortens a piece of text. It also removes a layer of [...]<div class="addthis_toolbox addthis_default_style addthis_32x32_style" addthis:url='http://www.kendallcopywriting.co.uk/use-the-active-voice-copywriting-tip-2/' addthis:title='Use the active voice &#8211; Copywriting tip #2 ' ><a class="addthis_button_preferred_1"></a><a class="addthis_button_preferred_2"></a><a class="addthis_button_preferred_3"></a><a class="addthis_button_preferred_4"></a><a class="addthis_button_compact"></a></div>]]></description>
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<p>Here’s what I mean. Below are two pieces of copy for a hammer:</p>
<p>Passive<br />
This powerful hammer can strike nails into the toughest timber.</p>
<p>Active<br />
This powerful hammer strikes nails into the toughest timber.</p>
<h2>Pull back the smothering blanket</h2>
<p>Using the active voice often shortens a piece of text. It also removes a layer of words that otherwise form a softening, smothering blanket between you and your reader. It’s important that your copy retains a sense of urgency, so use the active voice. Your copy will instantly become more direct, more powerful and more persuasive.</p>
<p>(Picture courtesy of <a title="Anna Banana on Flickr" href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/annarama/" target="_self">Anna Banana</a>)</p>
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